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Don't worry about the positions of the dogs ((i will be changing that on photoshop once they are inked, colored, and scanned)) Bottom one is a Kai-ken ((that is why he's drawn smaller then the other one )) and the top one is a kai-ken-GSD-mixed i know the face is pretty off on the bottom dog and the left front leg of the top dog looks off as well Note i used NO reffs for these poses... these are 100% mine and i must say i have been seeing A LOT of improvements in my art lately i have been getting A LOT better on my own X3 Change their breeds.Change their Designs.That's not Realistic.That's not natural. you didn't use/take my Advice ((some i will others i won't sorry.... i can't please everyone)) You didn't change what i pointed out to you (( somethings on my art work i WILL NOT change for they are the things that make my artwork MINE!!!! so get over it))
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The Kai-ken
the front legs and paws are really nice, and his hind left leg too.
however, the hind right leg looks slightly side view, specially because of the paw. this may help you with that [link] & [link]
also, the head look quite big and the muzzle displaced maybe because there isn't a clear difference between the head and the neck.
the only thing I have to say about the kaiken-GSD is that the front legs could be longer.
other than this you did an amazing work
Like other say, the head it too big and give him more forehead, the muzzle doesn't need those lines next to the eyes.
On the first one you've made the back legs much better and the paws too - do the same for the leaping one. Define the anatomical structure with more but smaller lines instead of one big one.
For drawing paws in general, the two middle fingers are longer than the other two, put a bit of distance between the big pad and those middle fingers. But it's a big improvement aside from these minor things
I can't explain it that good, how about I make some redlines of this instead? If you want of course